This is my final edit. Please comment, any feedback would be appreciated, as I can then amend any mistakes, and evaluate my film. I have added a second part to the opening to create the meaning that the first part is a precursor to the events at the end of the film, and therefore, the film's narrative would go back to the beginning and move forward until it reaches this event and then reveal the conclusion. I have also added a secondary soundtrack to this part of film and it would be good to get any feedback about it as I still have not made up my mind whether or not to keep it.
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