Thriller Opening 1st Draft

This is a draft version of my thriller opening, I still need to finalise the music (the drums are a bit too loud and need to be more in the background) and I need to re-shoot the sequence that features the two main characters walking towards the shed. This is for 3 reasons: there are water droplets on the lens, my shadow is on the floor, and they both smile as they pass the camera. I will also need to film the final sequence that will join onto the end of this sequence. I have also spelt the title wrong, and therefore, this mistake will need to be sorted out. This video will also act as a reference for the actors so they know exactly what they were wearing so there are no continuity issues in costume.